Do you remember how birds
would wait until we woke up
so they could be feed?
Do you remember
the time you saved me
from falling in the trap we built?
I wish I could carry that smell of burnt twigs
and the mixed smell of leaves and rice
with me forever.
Every night I would lay by the bright,
warm flame that accompanied
the smell of rice pudding.
I remember I would pick
the rough leaves as I daydreamed
about what would happen if we were lost.
If only life could give us another chance to go back.
Mo’ui’s poem was inspired by Lauris Edmond’s poem ‘Camping‘, picked for the blog by Kate Camp a few weeks ago.
Hello, my name is Mo’ui. I am from St Bernard’s College in Lower Hutt and I am a proud Tongan. I have a brother who is 7 years and a father; my mother passed away when I was 13, I am now 14 years and in Year 10. I love music and English. I want to pursue music when I am older because I love to compose songs and write lyrics.
Wow. Thanks for sharing that. What a bright mind and delicate touch Mo’ui has!
the poem is so heart POPPINGLY good